Reality

This morning, i sat there prying,

Deep into my mind

When i saw your hand held out, asking why

But i soon realized what this was:

Mereley a dream,

Because When you are in love,

Reality is always better than any dream

You could possible imagine.

Reviews

[Liverpoolfan]

Very good. A bit short I suppose, but good nonetheless. However, one thing sticks out and that is the fact that merely has been spelled incorrectly. But yhh. It's good.

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Romantic and beautiful, I like it. Good writing.

[A]

Wow, this was great. Short, and sweet. xD

The last three lines were awesome. @@