Firestorm

Obsessed.

With the pounding of the rain.

It beats within my breast

As the flood waters

Threaten to rise.

I want to drown in you.

Abandon the safety net--

And inhale your scent.

Tame this burning heart

In your cool calm.

Unquenchable fire

Longs for the sea.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

A portrait of passion. Good use of storm imagery to represent uncontrollable emotions. Last two lines quite moving, a nice way to end the work.

[Indigoshadows]

Thank you so much for your review!