The Fall

Desire

To fall into me hard

Until you're soft again.

Tight muscles carry the burden

Of holding your breath.

Afraid to fall

In your captor's eyes.

Fall into me

With your heart alone.

Pour into me

Your secret fears.

So hard--

I know.

Release.

Sweet release--

To open like a book

Exposed to the air.

Deep sigh of relief,

Warmth flooding your veins,

With a dull, honeyed ache.

Satisfaction

To the soul.

Reviews

[Tony]

There's there trust exercise. Where a person falls backwards and their friends catch them. I think when a person "falls" as you put it, into another person. It's about trust and a sense of honestly that 2 people can share with each other.
Well that's just my little interp when you look past the sensuality of the language. Awesome poem anyway you look into it.

[Indigoshadows]

That's the beautiful thing about poetry... it's like scripture. Different interpretations to best fit your current situation. Thank you.

[CLR9]

danggg

Is this pome about bopping? You know, churning the butter? You know, chopping the meat? You know

like, sex

[Chris]

Below the surface is the person we seek to know.

[Indigoshadows]

Truly. Thank you for your comment.

[Planet x]

so many emotions , complicated

[Indigoshadows]

Thank you!