Hell Inside My Head

Sometimes, our thoughts can be relentless and give us hell.

It's hell inside my head,
it's firing all around,
like a wild bullet ricochet,
without making a sound.
I try to run away from it,
I try so hard you see,
but how can I keep running away,
when I can not run from me.
It has been so very long now,
that I can't remember when,
I use to feel normal,
what I'd do to go back to then.
My thoughts seem to build up,
vast as the ocean,
like waves they crash and bang and bash,
I feel the pain with every motion.
How can this be happening,
to someone like myself,
how could I have forgotten that happiness, 
is the very greatest wealth.

Reviews

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

this is very cool. I really loved the rhyming scheme. it flowed so gracefully. this is a beautifully penned piece and is really strong. I can really feel the inner maelstrom taking place in this poem.
Great job.

[Riley Jules]

Awesome i really appreciate the kind words thanks :)

[Saddam]

How can this be happening,
to someone like myself,
how could I have forgotten that happiness,
is the very greatest wealth.

It is sure, Hell is in our Head. Great and attention capturin title. And body is too. Thanks.

[Riley Jules]

wowzers thanks so much :)

[Saddam]

your welcome dear.