Anger Illustrated.

I try my best to please your wishes,
your overbearing words,
my frustrated twitches.
I hate your voice , I hate your face,
shut your mouth and keep out of my space.
A perfect salt of the earth is what you want me to be,
'just like you' and not like me .
Your intent to control me is what makes me loathe you most,
your disregard to accept me is lingering far off the coast.
When I look up at you high atop on your pillar in the sky,
you glaring down at me yet I know not the reason why.
All my life I've been sick, seeing the world in gray instead of in colour,
yet you expect so highly of me and treat me like no other.

My anger stews inside of me, like a magma filled volcano,
yet you dance around my danger zone for the intent that I do not know.
Please keep your distance, please cease to be my foe,
for if it is for the enemy such as you, one day my crater might blow.

Author's Note

This is solely a poem to release my anger about a certain person in my life, as writing helps calm me down when I'm angry.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

hate your voice , I hate your face,
shut your mouth and keep out of my space.
A perfect salt of the earth is what you want me to be,
'just like you' and not like me .





Now I like the wording

[Riley Jules]

thanks ma brotha!

[Celtic]

OMG...!
Hope you won't release your anger on me...lol
This's very nice poem, i've never seen such kinda frustration about someone, wht a nice piece, you know what your this writin' has already been shown that how much you're or you were angry at that time on other one.
I was worryin' or i was afraidin' to write my review to think "couldn't you release your anger on me..."..lol

It's nice ink, words're powerful indeed, you know what i loved this line
I hate your voice , I hate your face,
shut your mouth and keep out of my space....
very nice line now from now, if i'd ever b angry on other one, i'd' surely gonna b using these line to another one.

what a nice piece, lovely write, i wanted to read your more stuff, but due to time shortage......................................
anyway, i'll read your more stuff soon...but this's my best poem as i've see here by you.

lovely write...great job.

[Riley Jules]

Hahaha! Don't worry i won't release my anger on you, I was probably the angriest I'd ever been when I wrote this because generally I tend to hold things in unless I'm writing. Thank you very much for reading and posting such a nice review. I'll be sure to read some of your things in the near future aswell! :)

[Celtic]

Sure why note, have a nice readin' on my stuffs too...
you know what you well mentioned in your author's note, have a look
"writing helps calm me down when I'm angry..."yeah, this just happens with me too, because about whatever things, whatever matters we write after converted into words we all feel good, relax...

me too write to make myself calm...from anger n from every thing' that expressed me...lol anywayz, goo write, sure i'll too have a look on your stuffs too till nice readin' n great writin'

:)

[Shadey Jadey]

Fantastic way to release your anger, and its wonderful. A great write, very descriptive xD

[Riley Jules]

thank you ! haha i was pretty mad

[Annabelle Lee]

Writing helps a lot of people with that, sort of a creative release. I much enjoyed reading and I hope you are now feeling better

[Riley Jules]

thank you :)