The Best in Me

You're a special kind of angry

The creatively cruel 

"Brings out the best in me." ha

More like "Brings out the fire in my heart."

The more I think, the more I slip on the edge of a maelstrom

eventually slipping into to the eye

I try not to form the words, and practice them

Else, I'd lose my ground and fall to hers.

But, I guess it's my fault anyways

For being so stupidly blind

I'm permanently bitter, and I'm glad I found it later than never

The expected happiness lasted so unexpectedly

A pathetic two years, I know what it is now.

Reviews

[abbybroncos]

At the beginning of this I was inspired but towards the end I lost interest and it was a little hard to comprehend at times it seemed as if you were running thought to thought without stringing them together. Overall though, it was a good poem, good vocabulary and I could tell that you had big emotions portrayed into your words.

[Silentspeaker]

Hey thank you, really. I read this comment last night and I cried a lot and got pretty bigheaded. But, I really needed this, and I understand what you'er saying. I'll try to improve. Thank you so much for being honest.

[abbybroncos]

I appreciate that you understood that I was trying to help you, most people on this site don't see it that way for some reason. I'm sorry I upset you, that wasn't what I wanted. You're welcome I hope you do improve I'll try to make sure I read more of your newest work so that I can tell you that you are improving :)(:

[Sami Khalil]

It brought the best and worst in you...Bravo...........

[Robin Thomas]

wow=u go ahead and emote. Good Job.