Am I what you want me to be?

My Skin pale my eyes blue.

I can do anything a human can do.

But I'm different I can do different things.

I may not look it and I don't have wings.

 

But I breath I blink.

I see I think.

I'm build for others.

Yet my mind wants to recover.

 

Built only to love from the heart.

Not built to hate or to stick to a chart.

Poke and prodded hated by all kinds.

Both Machine and human combined.

 

What am I to you?

What do you want me to do?

When broken would you put my pieces back together with glue?

So tell me what would you do???

Reviews

[Silere]

The flow is great.. I loved reading this. I hope you continue to write because you are quite unique. Thank you for sharing!

[R.D.Scott]

I like this piece, it flows really well and does make you stop and think about what you could be writing about.

[funeralmoon]

very nice.. good conveying your emotions through words.. nice job

[tanker22]

the third stanza was on it. i enjoyed it alot. although once again you have quite a few spell errors along with punctuation errors. i have one question. do your poems come for up north or down south? or are they somewere in between your heart and your head? curious...

[Tate Morgan]

I see in you a poetic spirit.Don't worry some day when you find the truth And it turns out you were right to feel different than they.Then you will have found the meaning of life .And reasoned that you are a poetic soul.It isnt so hard to understand why most sheep cant understand the lamb.They are no more emotionally grown up than your average dog ,So when I see a poetic soul languishing in the sea of misery .Over self reflection and painful remorse I say set your sails and sail on by .In future you will be the one who's opinion matters .
your new friend Tate

[StoryTailor]

THis is great, it flows well and seems to paint a picture for the reader to investigate. I love it, it makes me think.

[Domo]

This poem lingers in my mind. This one really got to me. I love the flow of it, and the way the words make the picture drawn out into a canvas. Great job on this one. Keep up the great writes, your talent is like no one elses talent. ☺
~D♥m♥~

[CircusNerd]

i like this piece. it sticks to a specific topic, and though the lines fluctuate in length, it gives the reader enough time to contemplate the meaning behind the words in a calm and unrushed manner. nice job :D