Nowhere Man (04/16/08)

Thoughts on being invisible.

invisible.

no-one's there.

"how pleased i would
be for Someone to
notice my life. least of all
me."

no-one thinks. trapped
in promises to
Someone.

hopes against
hope to be

noticed to

no avail. he is
after all

invisible.

Author's Note

Pretty awful feelings today. Enjoy.

Reviews

[Jennifer]

I get the same way all the time. I just keep moving forward anyway that I can.

[Niki Disaster]

I love anything that gets straight to the point. Bold and direct statements are the best to make. Interesting choice of breaks in verses & use of punctuation.