Drowning for You to Save Me

Drowning for You to Save Me

Four hours, Five days, a week.

The cold water and the hot sun,

It's your love I seek.

As I shiver in my towel,

You offer me your jacket.

I accept with great love.

But, not with gracefulness, for I lack it.

I fell in the water,

You followed shortly after.

Everyone knew I could swim.

But, it doesn't mean I can't falter. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[stars are far]

haha that made me smile, its kind of cute, and very well done.
great work :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of thoughts in the poem.
"Everyone knew I could swim.
But, it doesn't mean I can't falter. "
Good to falter for the right reasons.Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote