Another Heart that Beats No More

Another Heart that Beats No More

A Poem by Maddy
"

A feeling I've felt before

"

In the rain

You ran outside

To bring me pain

And take my pride.

 

I felt you

Rip out my core

Your knife went through

I stood no more.

 

Here I lay

And now you run

But you will pay

For what you've done.

© 2011 Maddy


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Oh wow, I love it! The rhyming makes it easy to read and the poem is obviously sad, which is why I like the ending.

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