Broken

Sometimes I write dark poems.

If it weren't for the broken parts of me

I wouldn't be able to feel

Rock bottom is the scenic view

From the places I go to heal

twisted and knotted 

but still my outside shined

now I cannot keep polished

What I can no longer find

Lost inside a ravenous soul

and a heart that's lost it's beat

I once craved a many things

but now nothing more than defeat

I loved hard and gave my all

now there is nothing left

except for a body, battered and bruised

that yearns for it's last breath

Author's Note

Sometimes I like honest reviews.

Reviews

[Kevona Giscombe]

It's an amazing poem. I loved how you brought your emotions to life. From reading I knew you were talking from a personal experience. However, I would like to see you relate to your audience more and maybe use some more figures of speech. Overall it was pretty good. I loved it.

[InTheArena]

Thank you. I will try more figures of speech in the future.

[Lord of mad men]

Wonderful just wonderful it was great it let me think about myself. Great job I loved it!

[Leizel Feolino]

I feel this so much. I'm broken right now as well, but I really hope you find yourself and find happiness along the way.