Communicatory

One should educate themself, always.

  Don't draw your pictures with broken tools
       or make half-assed paintings 
    scrawled in faeces upon cracked stones
             For much like images in cubes
     your message looks garbled and sub-human

     Naught a second more is required
    to circumvent primitive vocalizing,
           nor is construction of adequate design
     begging for the highest scholars
         Yet your whispers pour out 
like molasses caught on a muddy hill

       You think me queer for my belief
      in strong communicatory design
        Yet I hear nothing but buzzing
       from your maw misaligned

    Do you expect to be believed?

Reviews

[Laura]

I like the way this flows. It sounds very smooth and I like the tone of it. I especially like the first stanza; that one really stands out to me, I don't have specific reason as to why it does, but I really enjoyed it!