Pane

Pane

A Chapter by Scott Christian
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This is one of my favourite works. It has been published in an anthology book for webloggers.

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She dances along a pane of glass
Wild and free
She has no set direction
Nor bonds to hold her back
She leaves a trail
behind her -- where she's been
I try to imagine her life before
A feat
                  Impossible

The sky beats a dull colour
it's grim sheen cast upon
my face
I hear the gentle rap upon my roof
The patter of countless trails
to follow
I smile -- faint, obscure
We've danced this step 
                  before

I place my finger
to follow the trail she left
I dance to her steps
jagged -- beautiful
And as she slips below the line
I stop for a moment
in mournful reflection
I slowly place my finger

upon another trail
And I think to myself
"Maybe, this time
                    she'll stay?"



© 2011 Scott Christian


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This is so vivid and so intense. I can imagine everything that is going on in it. I have to say, my favorite part is the second stanza, especially this, "I hear the gentle rap upon my roof/The patter of countless trails/ to follow". It played in my head so well and it was one of those parts in a poem where you say, "Wow, he has a way with words, this is amazing." So pretty much, the only thing I can say, is that, I am a fan of this poem, and also your others.

Posted 13 Years Ago


love it..

Posted 14 Years Ago


awwwwwwwwww i likiee
taylor recomended it to e but i se eher point exactly how could u its so awesome-ishly endearing makes my heart flop but then again may b just cuz im crazy
luv it
luv ya
-ajm

Posted 14 Years Ago


I agree completely with Taylor H. It is a wonderful poem, and it has good meaning.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really liked this poem! Its wonderful

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great peice of poetry Scott. This one should be getting more reviews on here. Your descriptions are excellent. Love this one. Giving this one a rating of 100.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Careful, people steal things on here. >;[.
Also, lovely.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 23, 2010
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