Gone

I don't really know what i was going for, I thought i'd try something new

 

Flesh rips

Blood drips

Chains bind

Dark mind

 

Souls break

Hearts ache

Angels fall

Demons call

 

My simplistic ordainment of page with words

Which seem to twist the light to night, the will to fight

Is gone.

 

For when the time comes to destroy this life

With noose or knife, to end this strife

I’m gone.

Author's Note

Let me know where i can improve

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

i like it
Great job

[Butterflymom]

WOW, this is intense, raw, and very well done. Great job on this piece, and the way you expressed the feeling.