How does it feel

I just kinda wrote it, it might seem kinda self-explanatory to some =/ and i know it's short, i dunno if that kinda adds to the impact..

 

How does it feel to be ignored?

When the silence is louder than screams

How does it feel to know nobody cares?

When darkness takes over your dreams

 

How does is feel to be unloved?

To dry your tears alone

How does it feel when no-one listens?

To be left with the sound of the tone

 

How does feel to know no-one would miss you?

When your heart gives up to be free

How does it feel to know nobody’s coming?

How does it feel to be me

Reviews

[Jonathan Brooks]

This is very sad, but well written. I really like the line "When the silence is louder than screams". It's terrible to think that people in this world get left alone with nobody's shoulder to cry on. But sometimes that's where good poetry comes from...

[Butterflymom]

This is very sad, and melancholy, but very beautiful and well written. The pain leaps from the page, and it's obvious you've truly felt like this before. Thank you so much for sharing this piece.

[Jaeda]

I like poems like these.
You aren't asking me, you're asking yourself, and the rhetorical question makes the tone sad.

[Ama May Cooper]

very sombre and very sad.
i love the quizzical style and the way the questions remained unanswered
you can feel teh sadness leaping of the page
beautifully done
your sincerlly a.cappi

This is definitely self-explanatory to me. Because I can really relate to it. It's incredibly painful and hurtful to be ignored.

It's not too short, just short enough to get to the point.