The Lone Writer

Inspired by the quote "The kid in the back of the class opening fire into his notebook, ink explosions of thought, is the kid to watch out for..." David Levithan, The Realm of Possibility

 

Explode in a flash of *light*

 

Pen hits paper I begin to write...

 

Thoughts scream out,

 

Paper floods

 

Leaking off like dripping blood...

 

Consuming minds

 

Ignoring signs.

 

Cannot fight

 

So I just write...

 

Look out for me the writer

 

Cause no one seems to know,

 

When my pen hits paper

 

Thoughts soon EXPLODE.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

This was remarkable! I loved the speed, the rhyme and the formation of the thoughts going down the page.

I felt that it captured the quote and "EXPLODED" it onto the screen! A really wonderful creation.

The only thing that made me stumble on the flow was this line : "So I just write..." I think you could get rid of the "So" I felt it read better with out it.

Continue the awesome work!

Eternally Your's
Aaron

[J.Black]

I'm in love with this poem! kudos.

It is so captivating with it's words, it's brilliant.

I feel the same way usually when I'm trying to translate my thoughts onto paper, hehe.

[PhoeniX]

ouch! what an impact of words. very imaginative and creative. i like the way you formed the poem. colorful and EXPLODING lol. good work

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Mmmhmm, I love this. A very inspiring piece and you did a marvelous job. Fantastic write!!!

Heather

[Sean M. Addams]

very cute piece... nice flow to this one ...... show what it feels like transferring your thoughts to paper... nice job.

[These Haunted Hallways]

This was so awesome! For years ive been trying to describe what i feel when and how i write, and u've summed it all up in this poem, and i know i couldn't of said it better myself hehe. Beautiful Write! And u look great in the photo, too ;)

B.A.

[Patrick Gerlits]

I absolutely loved this poem.
Really inspired me to get back to my writing.

[He@ther!]

This is awesome!!!:)

I love it, inspiration in paper form:)

or in this case, computer screen form lol:)

great job!!:)

-Heather