The Lone Writer

Inspired by the quote "The kid in the back of the class opening fire into his notebook, ink explosions of thought, is the kid to watch out for..." David Levithan, The Realm of Possibility

 

Explode in a flash of *light*

 

Pen hits paper I begin to write...

 

Thoughts scream out,

 

Paper floods

 

Leaking off like dripping blood...

 

Consuming minds

 

Ignoring signs.

 

Cannot fight

 

So I just write...

 

Look out for me the writer

 

Cause no one seems to know,

 

When my pen hits paper

 

Thoughts soon EXPLODE.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

This was remarkable! I loved the speed, the rhyme and the formation of the thoughts going down the page.

I felt that it captured the quote and "EXPLODED" it onto the screen! A really wonderful creation.

The only thing that made me stumble on the flow was this line : "So I just write..." I think you could get rid of the "So" I felt it read better with out it.

Continue the awesome work!

Eternally Your's
Aaron

[♥ Kinnixk]

How cool, I love it; the colors were good and it caught my attention.

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So freaking awesome!!!
I totally loved this,
Amazing write, love the colorfulness and the set up.
Nice job!

[Chris]

Flowed well and with "class" and the colors helped.

[neverkissed]

I liked it! Contains a certain rhtyhm that I just can't make into words.

[just is]

This is so true
I like this it's short and to the point
A very creative write here
I like the different colors
You put in this.

[Arthur Crow]

This is the voice of the pen speaking loud and proud..
I'm sure all poets would relate to this gem in a positive way.
Fantastic!

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Now this was just cool! A fun explosive poem with lots of color!

The imagery was simple, solid and easy to envision and follow.

Great Write!

Snow Leapard

[Angelic Darkness]

I love this...so expressive, as describes us rare breeds so well:).

[AmeliaRose]

i love it! it sounds like a little jump rope jingle [i mean that as a comment] and it kind of gets stuck in my head. especially the last two lines

[Spoken]

I can relate.. very well expressed.. reminds me of when i began writing, all my poems were angst ridden.. I love the images of thoughts exploding-like ink splatter on paper. Awsome :)