Baby Vampire's Ultimate Plan

 

Baby vampire

Wants your blood

Offer your wrist

Or she'll be pissed!

She came to me

In the dark of night

I tried to flee

For she caused me fright.

Her mouth was open

Fangs showed with pride

Without a nibble

She feared she'd die.

A promise she made

I wouldn't die that day

My blood I did give

So we both may live...

Her protector came

To see the sight

Of the baby vampire

Nibbling away in the night.

His face showed fear

For my death was clear!

He gave me life

Now I am his wife

For that was the plan

Baby Vampire wanted a mom and dad...

Reviews

[Annalisa]

This reminds me of Claudia from Interview with a Vampire. It was an interesting read, i loved the ending but would have like the beginning to be a bit more vague, mysterious, maybe leading. But that is a personal style choice, great work as always. It's impressive that you fit an entire story into something so compact.

[These Haunted Hallways]

lol!! This was awesome! The baby having that plan to get what she wanted...that plan was well executed haha! Excellent job with this!

B.A.

[J.Black]

aw I loved this!
I thought it flowed together wonderfully.
WELL DONE.
x

[Ariadne President]

aww, this is a cute poem that you have written. Even the picture is sooooo cute!

[James Watts]

I liked this. Nice and dark little poem.

[Cyper]

wow i really enjoyed reading that =) thank you! the imagery it painted made me very happy indeed

[frogbean]

wow. this was nicly written. i enjoyd it. it is sortof an ironic poem

FrOgBeAn-
Na MaNaWa Apau Ikaika

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A nice write....great ending to think you were given eternal life. A very possitive feel....yet I wonder what happened to the baby vampires mother?lol

[SM Davis]

this has almost a hoppy feel to it.....a staccato if you will. Very nice.

[An owl on the moon]

Interesting twist in the darkness! Love your vivid imagery and imagination!!!!!!

Craig