Pity The Crying Child

Pity me, the little one... for i have always been outdone...

 

Pity me,

The poor baby.

Lost in a sea of doubt

Not knowing where to turn

How to pay for an education

When I barely learn

 

Pity me,

The crying child.

Lost in the forgotten world

Everything seems blurred

No reason to live

Nothing else to give

 

 

Pity me,

The doubting one.

Lost in the pain

Nothing there, nothing gained

Wallowing alone in the night

Never knowing wrong from right

 

Pity me,

The little one.

Lost in this life

Feeling every bit of strife

Cannot escape captivity

So everyone please, pity me...

 

Author's Note

Thank you Liliana (one of my muses)... I had a bad day and nothing seemed to help until my muse liliana graced me with her words.

I don't want to be pittied... It just came to me...

Reviews

[Enigma]

Wow!! What an awesome piece of writing...
Don't pity yourself...
Everyone has bad days, everyone makes mistakes and everyone gets through it. So will you...
Till then just have patience and faith...^_^
ABout the poem, it gave me a heartache. I feel sad that you're going through such a hard time. Stay strong!!
My best wishes to you!!
And by the way... I loved the form, the flow, the rhyme, the word choice...practically everything about your poem... It was stunning, I tell you!!
OUTSTANDING WRITE!! WELL PENNED!! *hugs*

[Laura Sparkle]

Its always easy to say "Pitty me" but sometimes we need someone to pull us aside and make us look at ourselves to see us. Someone to say "Look, it sucks right now, but you'll get through it. I promise." :)

Nice write! I really liked it.