The Vampires' Request

 

Ladies and Gentlemen

May I have your attention please!!!

I have an announcement I am forced to make

I'd listen up or your lives they will take...

No longer are you the top of the food chain as of today,

Sick of darkness and ridicule, vampires will now make you pay

Your words have been sharp, but not like their teeth!

So they have decided to turn over a new leaf.

Please listen and follow all these new rules

If you don't, you show you're all a bunch of stupid fools.

 

Author's Note

What do you think the rules will be??? What did you think of it as a whole? (please don't give just a Good job tell me what you like or didn't like...)

Reviews

[Iretex2012]

nice...

[Nocturnal Huntress]

Rule One: I am God. Mortals are not.

Rule Two: Mortals are food, not friends.

Rule Three: The only one taking a bite out of anyone here is me.

Rule Four: Man shall pay in blood. Money, sex, and literary tributes are no longer acceptable.

[closed]

I loved this sooo much! Absoluetly fantastic. Hmm...I wouldn't mind if a vampire wanted a bite out of me ^___^

[Beka]

Depends on what kind of vampires yours are. They seem slightly ruthless. Like they are angry at man kind. describe them to me and then maybe I can understand them better and help you figure out the rules. All writers have different vampires. Yours are obviously not vegetarians. Lol.

[An owl on the moon]

Powerful write that feels like a piece of something much bigger... It tastes of first blood, perhaps!

[Fran Marie]

oh oh I think I am scared now~ Here come the vampires~

Awesome vampire piece my friend~ Keep writing~

Fran Marie

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Ooo...I like. Evolution has a habit of changing the food chain and one day we may just find ourselves the pray. A great piece :)

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This poem is awesome. As The Ice Queen of the Vampires, I totally LOVE this entire piece. ;) You did a fabulous job, great write!!!

Heather

[John Stussy]

I think I'm a bit prepared for your kind, got me a toy at home. You have til Friday to eliminate me :P

[These Haunted Hallways]

Well, i know at least one rule...All U Can Eat After Dark!!!!! lol- Pretty cool poem. Grammar and punctuation need to be shore up, but pretty good start :) Kinda reminded me of one of Eminem's songs haha ;)

B.A.