Bubbly Bubbles

Just something fun...

 

Bubbles Bubbles

Everywhere!

Up above and in my hair

Look to the left then to the right

Turning my darkness into bright light

 

Bubbly Bubbly

That’s what I'll be,

Bubbles are all I see!!!

Lift me high, to touch the sky

So I can finally learn to fly

 

Bubbles Bubbles

Everywhere!

Embrace me high, so I won't despair

Bubble kisses on my puckered lips

Wow, this must be one great trip...

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

Sounds like a mixture of a bubble bath and a nice bottle of champaign mixed with acid. I love the bubbliness of it all! It's cute and whimsical in a floating in the clouds kind of way.

Makes me think of a kid with that bubblestuff, and has them floating all around them. I remember those moments.

Great Poem!
Infinity's Shadow

[Angelic Darkness]

This is such a cute poem. I can really feel you letting go,
being a kid again, letting your guard down. I get the
feeling you might miss your childhood or maybe things you
didn't get to do growing up. This is a great line: Bubble kisses on my puckered lips

Wow, this must be one great trip...

That brought a smile to my face. Thank you for reviewing
Two Worlds. AD

[Adela Muresan]

You illustrate a very enjoyable experience ,using a very pleasant cadence.
The last strophe reveals the purpose of the bubbly bubbles � to keep you away from the difficulties of life, an I like this way to ended it.

A.M.

[Tonya]

I love this. This is such a joyful, uplifting poem, and I love the way you designed it. Nice! It made me feel so happy!

[Annalisa]

Well you succeeded, this was a very fun piece. I especially loved the line "Bubble kisses on my puckered lips", it stood out and I paused a moment just to savor the line. Nice work.

[The Mad Prophet]

I am fascinaited by the most simplest of things. I was worries one day, and I was in the bath washing my hands and I noticed a bubble fly out of the soup. My worries was lifted away with that bubble. Poor thing, I think it poped because of the weight it took from me. That burden was heavy, it didn't make it too far. I love this poem, very expressive.

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

OMG I LOVE BUBBLES!!!! * steals a bubble* MY BUBBBLE! MINE!

Hhaha the poem was SO GREAT! oh my gosh I loved it!!!!! So fun and free and happy. I loved it

[closed]

Loved it! I haven't read many poems like this before, but as I read through it I could image floating on a bubble. Very nice

[Enigma]

Wow!! That was the cutest poem/song I've ever read about bubbles. At first, the title reminded me of the song 'Bubbly' by Colby Colliat. Great song...
Back to the poem...
I think it's a beautiful and happy piece. I was smiling end to end when I read this. I'll re-read it many times. I thought you were great at writing dark poems, but here's a shiniung example that you're good at writing almost anything....lol
FANTASTIC JOB!!!

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

LOL....I like this piece. Very light hearted and uplifting. A great write.