The Rabbit Hole

 

I jumped too far down the rabbit hole

In search of a vampire to call my own

His skin would be pale like the glistening moon

Teeth razor sharp that could split my neck in two

Hair would be brown like the dirt on the earth

Lips would caress my skin convincing me  it isn't sin

His Scent would linger through out the air

For some reason I just wouldn't care

When he'd sink his teeth into my neck

Drink of my liquor, I wouldn't turn to a wreck

But as I dreamed of my midnight seductor

Hauntingly I woke to see his pale moonlit face,

Took me in his death giving embrace

Worried and terrified when I wake in the night

When I see him I'm paralyzed in fright.

So here I beg of you to listen to my words

Don't jump too far down the rabbit hole

Or you could end up like me without a soul...

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

Danger lurks in the shadows, in the caves and the grottos
I liked this. It was a mix between something scary and dark, combined with a more humourous tone. Like alice in wonderland, gone Vamp.

I loved the images and the fear that came across clearly.
there were a few parts i stumbled on, what felt like an extra word that got in the way in places.
Over all it was really nice!

[Nocturnal Huntress]

And this is more like what I'm used to writing: the aftermath of taking pleasure, and the time before the real war for sanity begins.

[Moonblade]

Oh wow, I really like the last five lines. I'm really enjoying these vampire poems. I might have to start reading more poetry if I can find more on the darker side that I like this much.

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship D..]

I thank it was good, maybe im just weird, not being a vamp. Right? but all in all the book had spine, it had motion, but most of all it had two hearts falling in love with each another. Well I do hope to chat "witch" you again

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This is a great poem. I really like it, the elegant font and colors make this piece even better. Awesome write!!!

Heather

[a Messenger]

Good write. Again expressive of your true desires.
I loved the switch from desire to fear to remorse.
Beautifully done Kristy.

[Flow]

How many after reading this would still trade their soul for eternity of life? excellent write of course your love for vampires is showing through in your writing very well.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

This is absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing . debileah