Exquisite Binding Pain

Exquisite Binding Pain

A Chapter by *~Imperfectly Me~*
"

I found that a bite can create a binding pain... It has bound people in their wants, it can create a kind of pain that feels too good and makes the masochist in me crave to be who i am destined to be...

"

 

It's the way you bite

Makes my knees go weak

Toes curl

Eyes close

Exquisite binding pain

 

Just ease into my neck

Close your eyes, sink them in

Breath staggers

Voice gasps

Exquisite loving pain

 

Caress my skin with your fangs

Tease me till I cry

Pain, Blood

Screams, Moans

Exquisite lusting pain

 

Exquisite

Binding

Loving

Lusting

Pain



© 2008 *~Imperfectly Me~*


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I love how you have taken biting into a art form all it's own. It brings forth lusts of the erotic as well as the the pain of the flesh. Both blood and mind seem to blend with these words, creating something totaly enrapturing.

I really like this one! It brought forth the image and the sensations better then anything else i've read.
Great Job! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Great job. Very well written and presented.
I love it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

O.O This was wonderful, my only complaint is that the text made it hard to read a few of the words, to many curls and overlapping, but other than that this was perfect... I absolutely loved this, and can't think of much more than that to say. Lovely.


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I think this is one of my fav of yours. it has a nice flow to it that leads me to read it with a smile. Excellent work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I love how you have taken biting into a art form all it's own. It brings forth lusts of the erotic as well as the the pain of the flesh. Both blood and mind seem to blend with these words, creating something totaly enrapturing.

I really like this one! It brought forth the image and the sensations better then anything else i've read.
Great Job! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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