Exquisite Binding Pain

I found that a bite can create a binding pain... It has bound people in their wants, it can create a kind of pain that feels too good and makes the masochist in me crave to be who i am destined to be...

 

It's the way you bite

Makes my knees go weak

Toes curl

Eyes close

Exquisite binding pain

 

Just ease into my neck

Close your eyes, sink them in

Breath staggers

Voice gasps

Exquisite loving pain

 

Caress my skin with your fangs

Tease me till I cry

Pain, Blood

Screams, Moans

Exquisite lusting pain

 

Exquisite

Binding

Loving

Lusting

Pain

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

I love how you have taken biting into a art form all it's own. It brings forth lusts of the erotic as well as the the pain of the flesh. Both blood and mind seem to blend with these words, creating something totaly enrapturing.

I really like this one! It brought forth the image and the sensations better then anything else i've read.
Great Job! :)

[Nocturnal Huntress]

That's more like it, the very fabric of worldly vampires! Exactly what was needed, right on time.

[Angelic Darkness]

I really like this line: Just ease into my neck

Close your eyes, sink them in

That is a rush of sensuality that is higly erotic.
AD

[Asha Raphael]

it's so sweet . . wow!

[brita]

I like this one. It's a bit short, but sweet (or should i say, vampirelicious?). There's a great flow to it and i like how its not all just a story...The style of the poem makes me feel certain emotions more than anything else, and that's refreshing for once...Not having to follow a story.
This is my favorite of yours. You should enter it into one of those "Darkness" contests.
Good write! :]

[Sarah Morgan]

I love this poem. It makes me want to watch Buffy the vampire slayer series. Lol. Good write : )

[These Haunted Hallways]

Wow, damn! Not really sure what to say, but seems like all of the vampires these days are having more fun than I am lol. But for me, instead of a bite, I'll settle for a kiss from a cute girl anytime lol. Great work!

B.A.

[Enigma]

YOU'RE A VAMPIRE PRINCESS!!!
Wow!! Who could've thought that a vampire bite can bring so many different types of pain. Left alone write about it. I really liked the idea.Once again, it creeped me out a bit, but I'm getting used to it...lol
Great Job!!!

[Seriana]

Oooh, how hot is this? I love it, and the font makes it all the better!

[Bruce Bray]

ahh.. the love affair with the vampire..
always a great subject matter..
i love the way the writer displays that age old adage about pleasure and pain..
how can one know the exquisite nature of pleasure without pain?
also, i love the way the writer intertwines lustiness using words such as caress and tease..
lastly, i like the dark nature of this piece..
interspersing blood and pain with love and lust..
excellent!

[Michael X]

There is something about your writing that I really enjoy- its the form that you employ within-
gives the reader an imprinted emotional impression defining what it means to bring the title in to
light of the concept.. this vampiric analysis is captivating in the way you focus on the effects
"exquisite binding pain"... I felt as if I could feel the fangs in my own neck.. which is testament
to the quality of imagery produced with specific intent.. and that is
Exquisite-Binding-Loving-Lusting-Pain.... capturing and very well written- loved it, a fav