Bound To You

I'm realizing that i need to get a vampire bite.... Please someone... my neck is waiting...

 

My neck is waiting

So bite me

Don't be shy

Show your fangs

I am here waiting…

 

Bound to you

By invisible chains

My sweet vampire

Please kiss me

My skin is oh so soft

 

Don't you see

My prince to be

I yearn for that exquisite pain

It feels so good

When you entice me,

Oh please won't you

Let me be

Bound to you

For my want is true.

 

Can't you see

My prince to be

This should be our eternity...

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

Oh, this was wonderful! It flowed so smooth in an aroused blood drinking way.
I like this version better!
I loved the first stanza. "Don't Be Shy" was a image that made me chuckle, as if a vampire would hide in the shadows anyway if a willing neck was there just waiting!

Great Work!
Infinity's Shadow

[Nocturnal Huntress]

I'm reading along in your vampire poetry book. My recurring thought is, "Do you have a death wish? Because I know a guy..."

So far, so good. :)

[Flow]

I know the feeling of feeling bound to someone. I always enjoy your love for vampires and how you submit yourself, neck and blood to them. Well done~

[brita]

Very nice rhyme scheme and flow.
Gotta love the vamps. :]

[Moonblade]

Ahahaha, this poem reminds me of my teenage days of fantasizing for a lustrous vampire prince to come make me his princess. Your work really is fantastic. I'm no poet, but I think I can tell good writing when I see it.

[John Stussy]

Excellent poem, the font and the words match very well. Hopefully one of the undead will come by and grant you that pain.

[closed]

Very good I always enjoy a good vampire poem. Very nice

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Lovely font and a beautifully penned poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

You write awesome vampire poetry. I really like this one, fantastic write!!!

Heather

[SM Davis]

HHmmm....very interesting. A look at it from the other side. I liked it.