To My Sweet Muse

A poem dedicated to you my new muse, Mighty red fluff ball, mighty clacifer... Thank you!

 

To my new Muse:

 

At first I hated you

I didn't know what to do

But now I've realized

That I simply didn't have a clue

How much you'll help me

By refusing to let me write

For you are the mighty Calcifer

My little red fluff ball friend

you did not replace my other two

You've just made me do things I needed to do

 

You are formed around my emotions

You create my confusion

Anger creates my poetry

That is a known fact

Here you are making an impact

Anger irritates you

And you keep going on

About how much you hate that one stupid man

But hell, it's entertaining

So I have become your fan

 

I was lost, and you found me

And I tried to make you leave

But my muses invited you here

And who am I to argue

For they didn't know how to inspire me

I was worried that I would never write again

Cause you teased me with my words

Refused to let me write

And that is when we began to fight

I wanted to kill you

That I'll admit

 

But then my vampire told me that he'd quit

I then began to listen to your taunting words

Then some how my thoughts began to form

Poetry I wrote and a couple other things

But I finally realized that you're only trying to help me?

You want me to do homework

And I'll submit to you

For you are my other half

You'll tell me what to do

I'll follow every command

Cause my thoughts and words are in your hands

Reviews

[These Haunted Hallways]

I thought that this was pretty cool, actually. Trying to get deep in touch with yourself, and more, is a very complex, yet satisfying way to get to know the real 'you.' And it's worth it. Very descriptive. Great job with this :)

B.A.

[Tenten]

this is a long a*s welcome to mr. cal if i do say so myself, its good and you've stuck to your style. an enjoyable glance read.

[The Rose That Grew From..]

Interesting view at writers block good job.

[Kat_BT]

Great job!

[a Messenger]

A nice tribute to the new guy. Thank goodness he showed up so the rest of us can enjoy your work.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

You have a way with words....a very good creatie piece. Wonderfully written!

[PhoeniX]

great creativity. written well.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Loved this. Wonderfully penned and expressive.


Great Write

[Fran Marie]

wonderfully expressed piece ~well penned~Fran Marie

[Shadows of Sight]

Ah..The mighty fire that carry's the walking house! I have heard of that muse! lol

hopefully he will mind his P's and Q's! :)

GReat Poem i liked it's flow and its almost funny theme!