Please Tell Me

 

Tell me when

I'm crying

Can't feel the tears

Body numb from neglect

Consumed by fears

Breath is short and shallow

Screams can't escape

Mouth bound

unwanted invisible tape

The floor is wet with tears

Soul filled with fears

So please

Tell me when I'm crying

I can't feel them

On my face

Tell me when I'm screaming

Cause someday they'll escape...

Reviews

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Wicked!
I loved it, tied and bound, helpless to the ground! lol

Pushovers should be tied and gagged.
I hope it was a really sadistic guy behind those fears of this poem.... or a sadistic girl! lol

Totally fear raising!
I like it!

[a Messenger]

Another powerful piece of writing. The reader can feel the fear and frustration vividly.
Great job Kristy. Keep it up.

[An owl on the moon]

Such an emotionally powerful piece; the movement, the phrasing, the fear all so vivid. You so clearly paint a picture of one who is lost in the world and numb to everything around them. Brilliant...

[These Haunted Hallways]

This was like the ultimate voice inside each crying soul out there who desperately needs to escape from the madness. This was like incredible! I can really feel it. Great work!

B.A.

[Asha Raphael]

wow! really amazing!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

The reader can definetly pull out what the writer is feeling in this peice. Painful but wonderfully written.



Great Write.

[Kimmy]

Your ability to make the reader feel what you feel in your heart is inspirational. Youre writings are right on point. Great Job!

[Sarah Morgan]

I strait up love this. It's kind of makes me sad, but when I'm sad that's where most of my writing comes from. Keep this up.

[M_S_Lay]

very powerful..the emotions are stong, as is the image left in my mind

[Wolfwind Words]

I love how you always weave fear, lust and bondage together! always makes for a enlivening read!
Good work!