Alamosa Water Makes You Ponder...

Salmonella in the water always makes you ponder lol....

 

Sick of salmonella

Done with friends

Tired of strife

Bored with life

Wondering if I'll survive…

 

Sick of liars

Done with hate

Tired of disgrace

Bored with your problems

Wondering if you want me to survive…

 

But f**k it…

I finally got a bite!!!

Reviews

[Imagedden]

Hi there imperfectly Me,

This poem illustrates the fickility and shortfalls of the human and how you amazingly turn all the negative's around on your own when your sense of own self worth is revitalised by the bite of a fish.

I enjoyed it. I like the unexpected.

Imagedden

[These Haunted Hallways]

Ow ow, that toxic stuff hehe, i know what ya mean. I agree with everyone here. I like how uv turned the negative emotions to its positive. Cool hehe-

B.A.

[a Messenger]

Sick of liars

Done with hate

Tired of disgrace

Bored with your problems

Wondering if you want me to survive�

These five lines speak volumes about your state of mind.
I love this piece. It's short but says it all.
Nicely written.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is very playful and fun to read.. love the title .. then again it has some dire truths ,, tainted waters , liars and hate.. i think it is well written and like it!
Chloe
xoxo

[Shadows of Sight]

oh! Who'd you bit? he he!
This flowed well. :) it carried your weekly emotions across just fine! :)