My Tattoo...

a poem that I wrote after i got my tattoo....

 

Like your words...

It's permanent

It hurts

Like your voice...

It's raised

It's harsh

Unlike your words...

It's unique

It heals

Unlike your voice...

It's harshness disappears

It will some day fade away

Reviews

[Serendipity]

I love this.

I completely understand, the pain that heals and eventually fades away.

[An owl on the moon]

Love this one! Just had to read it! Love how you take a common theme and enfuse it with so much depth, letting your words cascade like a waterfall. Brilliant insight!

[J. Hampton]

Well done on the ....simili

sharp and concise
tangy ....piece of rant ....I enjoy your formatting

Blesssssssssss

[Tania Leigh]

Pretty cool comparison here....it's a gentle rant cleverly disguised as an observation....well done!

[a Messenger]

Very nicely done. Words and needles hurt, but art can heal.

[Wolfwind Words]

Two idea's i see blended in your words. One about your tattoo, and the other about humans need to be harsh of voice.
I liked the tone and the flow of this.
I hope it didn't hurt to much! :)

[Shadows of Sight]

Pretty cool write about body art! I've never experianced the needle that way myself, but i've watched as someone has. They screamed alot! :)
Thanks for sharing!