Fantasy Life

 

Fantasy Life

 

I dream  living mostly in my head

I have a fantasy life where I have strife

But my strife dissipates when prince charming comes along

For that is my dreams, my wants

I want my life from my imagination

I don't want to live in this damn generation

Romance and comedy

With chivalry not dead

Someone who holds me tight

In my dream world I am loved

Hated sometimes too

But in the end all is well

And I no longer live in this living hell

I call reality...

Reviews

[Laurie Morrison]

I'm grinning in empathy--I wrote a poem along the same lines about 30 years ago. There was a T-shirt at the time; "Before you meet the Handsome Prince, you have to kiss a lot of toads!" There was a song by Atlanta Rhythm Section called "Imaginary Lovers". Google the title and read the lyrics! I like your poem for itself and also because it affirms what I've suspected all along. It's good to be a bit of a pessimist. That way when things turn out well, we're pleasantly surprised!

[Joseph - Michael]

I can related to those lines; "I want my life from my imagination, I don't want to live in this damn generation" because I feel like that almost all the time. Also, those lines; "But in the end all is well And I no longer live in this living hell I call reality..." Guess we can't alway daydream of what we want, but that's life

Anyway, it's all still good there...

[These Haunted Hallways]

Boy, Im totally and completely with you on these two aspects in life here!! I, too, am the exact same way. All my life ive been in my head; the fantasy i want to live; that wonderous place that i dont think i will ever get to see and live it in this time. I just hope God has something really good in store for me on the other side hehe. 10,000 virgins maybe?? lol. Awesome piece ;)

B.A.

[a Messenger]

I want my life from my imagination

I don't want to live in this damn generation
How many times throughout my life time I have felt exactly the same. Like having been born into the wrong time. Wanting to live when chivalry, honor, truthfulness, and other such outdated virtues were still alive and well.
A superb piece Kristy.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Oh a fantasy life is great, living in dreams, but not all dreams are wonderful, some turn into nightmares.lol

A nice write!

[Shadows of Sight]

I like being out in nature, and away from the big urban centers it's an okay place to live and grow. But i agree 100% with your words when it comes to the masses of large population centers. Places that compress and try to control our every action and thought. So we turn inside and find worlds with in world to live in and play in. For it is better then the real world has to offer.
Great Write! :)

[Wolfwind Words]

Can i take some of your DNA and remake the world in the likeness of you!
I loved what this poem said, And i agree totaly! Better to live in our own minds then deal with the poluted and sorded world that people claim is real.
Great Write! :)