Forever Your Muse!

 

 

Drip

Drop

Drip

Drop

Blood cascades to the floor

Pain grips me

But I want more…

This pain is for you

It's what I'm needed to do

Drip

Drop

Drip

Drop

Life starts to end

Time then slows

To you the writer I do lend

My soul, my words

Use them well…

Drip

drop

Drip

drop

My blood is a never ending well

Here for you to use…

I will be your muse

My life must end

For your writing to begin

Drip

Drop

Drip

Drop

My life will end now…

Your writing will soon begin

I'm here for you until your end

You had no choice

Realize that please

This was the only way

Drip

Drop

Drip

Drop

Blood falls to the floor

My life has ended

I now give you my soul

My blood will not run dry

For in your heart, mind and soul it will abide

I'm here for you to use...

I am forever to remain your muse….

I leave so you can stay

 

Reviews

[KayOss]

Wow. It's rare that a piece of writing leaves me at a loss for words, but you have managed to do just that. Everything serves to create a piece that is incredible. I like the form, the repetition, the language, the tone and even the font and font color! I am sure that this was all done deliberately, but it all blends to create something wonderful. Very well done.

[Wolfwind Words]

This was cool! I liked the way it flowed, slowly down to the bottom, like a slinky down the stairs, all to be sacrificed to keep the insperation up in all the writers out there!
I always wondered where muse came from lol! :)
Is it on tap, or do you have to special request a leaching!
Great Write!
Hope Seattle treats you well!

[Princess_ck84]

Interesting... i like the format and the spcaces throughout. Love the font and colour choice as well...

As a challenge, I would like to see something from you this well crafted and interesting, but not so dark ??? ... something to think about...

Anyway, good job all in all :)

[a Messenger]

Excellent! I like everything about this piece. Thanks for sending it to me.


Jerry

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Excellent. loved the format, creative piece. Nicely done.


Great Write
Rayne

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, this poem is simply fabulous. I love the format, it just makes this terrific poem even better. Awesome write!!!

Heather

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

holy smoke.....this is really good. I like the flow and the creativity of the way you presented the work. Very good piece.

[Enigma]

Wow!! A brand new style for me!!
You've penned it well enough!!
Awesome...

[DeAn]

very nice indeed. it reminds me of another person who used the same style and grew very well at it. she was and is still a great poetress.

great job on this.

l8r g8r
-Tao