Forever Your Muse!

 

 

Drip

Drop

Drip

Drop

Blood cascades to the floor

Pain grips me

But I want more…

This pain is for you

It's what I'm needed to do

Drip

Drop

Drip

Drop

Life starts to end

Time then slows

To you the writer I do lend

My soul, my words

Use them well…

Drip

drop

Drip

drop

My blood is a never ending well

Here for you to use…

I will be your muse

My life must end

For your writing to begin

Drip

Drop

Drip

Drop

My life will end now…

Your writing will soon begin

I'm here for you until your end

You had no choice

Realize that please

This was the only way

Drip

Drop

Drip

Drop

Blood falls to the floor

My life has ended

I now give you my soul

My blood will not run dry

For in your heart, mind and soul it will abide

I'm here for you to use...

I am forever to remain your muse….

I leave so you can stay

 

Reviews

[KayOss]

Wow. It's rare that a piece of writing leaves me at a loss for words, but you have managed to do just that. Everything serves to create a piece that is incredible. I like the form, the repetition, the language, the tone and even the font and font color! I am sure that this was all done deliberately, but it all blends to create something wonderful. Very well done.

[Kat_BT]

Wow. I don't know what to say about this one. The formatting with the font color and placing of words is a very nice touch and helps the flow of it. Its very good and very well written. It appears as if it could have been written in the blood, if not for the fact that its electronic.

[Misa]

Unfortunately, l dont' have anything to add to this - it's already been said, and true to the last word. beautifully done, although the repetition of "My life must end

For your writing to begin

Drip

Drop

Drip

Drop

My life will end now�

Your writing will soon begin" did strike me as a bit off. For myself it slowed the piece down, though l suppose that could be the intention. Nicely done.

[J. Hampton]

The font....its' color and very interesting formatting ...
give this a certain additional edge.

"blood" in general ....symbolizes...irrevocable covenant.
this moves between passion....and obsession

good job

Blessssssssss

[These Haunted Hallways]

Woh, that was somethin. That sure opened my eyes. Although a morbid, and touching piece, it was brilliantly crafted with perfection ;) *Hugs*

B.A.

[An owl on the moon]

Brilliant imagery; brilliant symmetry! Such a depth and passion, the words painted so perfectly on the page. Incredible!

[Tracy Lynn]

Wow... that was indeed a very powerful piece with a powerful statement. Everything blended so well, right down to the font and color you chose. Very good job!

[Tania Leigh]

Very creative, this. The words alone are wonderfully dramatic, and then you go several steps further with the blood-red font...the font looks like Monotype Corsiva, a favourite of mine....and the repetition of "drip, drop, drip, drop" is very effective, especially the way your arranged it for visual appeal. Add a clever title, and viola! An excellent write! This is one of my favourites of yours. Great job!

[The Elder Pine]

Wonderful format and flow! That was an amazing piece. I felt as though the text mirrored the action that you described, brilliant write.

-High Road

[PhoeniX]

enjoyed every bit of this. the form you wrote it in was genuine and fit the part of the muse. great expression and description on how the muse is dying to have you keep it. great write!

[Danielle Teresa]

wow that really brought out some emotions in me...great work...i hope your alive though so I can keep reading your work...