Waiting For Your Return

MMmmmmmmmmmm...... Vampire..........lol

 

I stand at night

Waiting for you to return

For your bite I do yearn

Drink my blood

Make me your queen

I do not protest now

I'll expose my neck

Leave me a scar

Give me the pain

Don't leave me now

You have so much to gain

 

Come back my dear

I miss you so

I want your breath

On the back of my neck

You scared me so

When you showed your fangs

I pushed you away

When I should have asked you to stay

Please return, I beg you now

Here's an open invitation

Issued only to you

 

I stand at night

Waiting for you to finally return

Come back my dear

How I miss you so

My house turns cold

As winter nears

Please come back

I sense you here…

I see your steps in the snow

Coming to the window

Yet you leave me alone

 

Please my dear I beg you now

Why won't you come in

I invited you… it's no sin

I hear your steps

It's midnight now

In you come, showing your fangs

I expose my neck

And you sink them in

The pain is great

It hurts so good

Soon I'll turn to be like you...

Author's Note

I think I need a better title....

Reviews

[Savannah]

Oh, it's awesome. And vampy and such!

[DeAn]

call it Need...

it is a good write and I can sense the urgency of the call.

[Robert A. Pacheco]

WOW! I loved it.

"I stand at night

Waiting for you to return

For your bite I do yearn

Drink my blood"

AND

"Give me the pain

Don't leave me now"

Are the parts I like from it. =D

[Beautiful Disaster_33]

Loved this!
Great imagery all the way through
You have a wonderful talent, thank you for sharing

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

I like the title, it has just what is needed to set the poem off nicely. The flow and visuals of the piece are wonderful, I really liked the footprints in the snow part. I can see the longing to be taken be the vampire her lover and be made immortal. A great piece!

[Danielle Teresa]

that was fun to read...great imagery! good work!

[Danielle Allison <3]

Amazing write. It flows very nicely and its just amazing. Love it!

Danielle Allison

[Tania Leigh]

How about "Waiting In Vein" ? :-)

I like this!

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LoL, wow! Very amazing. Kinda speechless right now lol. Very excellent work!! The vampires are a hit these days in peoples' writing, huh? lol ;)

Mikey

[EnterUSerName]

Holy Crap..

This is amazing :) I love it... It just flows and it brings the imagery to my eyes and the emotions to my heart.