On A Dusty Shelf

 

On a Dusty Shelf

 

Here I am

Open my cover

See how torn I am

My binding is breaking

I'm held together by my own will

Now see the scratched out words

And the ripped out pages

The Words are my scars,

missing pages are the memories

too painful for me to read

But if you ask about them...

I promise I will tell

I will not hide my personal Hell

I am an open book now read me!

Find out who I am

No question will go unanswered

Nothing will I hide...

I am a book open in front of you

Read me and know me

I will not lie

For here in you hands I will abide

I lay here broken

Asking for nothing

Just notice I'm held together by my will

I do not wish to be mended...

For I don't know how

Not even Duct tape can fix me

For my nothing will stick

Please Hold me gently

read my every word

Please read me

and Know me...

Don't leave me be

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

This was cool! I imagined one of my grandfathers old books talking to me about philosophy, while i held it in my hands!
I really liked how, not only was it the book talking, but yourself as well.
I shall always treasure this book, and hold it's words dear.
GReat Job! :)

[K. Aurora]

OH, this was a wonderful poem! Personifying a book on a shelf; In such a way that it gave it feelings and fears and hopes.
In a way it makes me feel sad, as I know alot of books simply sit on those old dusty shelves and never get opened to unlock the treasures with in.
I really like the lines about the book being held together by force of will. That added a wonderful touch, telling us that the book is selfless, it's entire purpose in life is to be cherished and read; Yet it know's it's meaning fades if it keeps being patched.
Bringing in the idea that once the knowledge and secrets that it holds are gone, their gone! No going back. I liken that to people. Once a person dies, that's it; Can't go back and make amends or do things differently. So best to treat that book right the first time and share in it's divine purpose.

Wonderfully writen poem! A truly enjoyable read.

[Kelsmiles]

Oh I really liked this! The flow of the words and the imagery are wonderfully well done.

[LeeLu]

The symbolism is fantastic!
The visual is amazing!
Great poem all around.
Congrats.

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This is a great poem! I have books that are old and tattered. I never thought of using them as inspirtation for a poem. This was an original.

[PhoeniX]

mmm..it was like an old doll wanted to feel the warmth again. again, your expressions are great with every piece i read. a talent ive been seeing in your writing. keep it up

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Imperfectly you; perfectly written. I really like the story of a lost and lonely book upon a shelf of how many books? Does it matter? Is not every book a wonder in and of itself? Who can ever get tired of reading?

Beautifully penned.

Peace and love,
Gabe

[Baby Boy]

Wow! This is powerful and a I like the comparisons of your life and a book! Very creative but most of all, your words are moving and it definately tells a story! :) Another fine write from you sweetie! You shall heal in time! I'm here now! :) One luv sweetie! Holla at ya boy!


-JC-

[a Messenger]

I loved this. I really like presenting yourself as a (slightly?) damaged book. Are you really that open? Is anyone?
Beautifully written.
I am a book open in front of you
Read me and know me
I will not lie
A great write.

Jerry

[John Parker]

Excellent write.........could take it from the prospective of a book talking to someone or a person left out of everything wanting attention......