Just One Bite

 

Just One Bite

 

Lips caress skin

Just the nape of my neck

Pain envelopes me

Blood drips down

I knew I should've fled

As I lay dying on his bed...

 

He draws back

Lips crimson with my blood

Dark, mysterious

My eyes wide in fright

His skin glows in the night

Masochist takes over my body

The pain feels too good.

Like the others before me

I did not see

 

Teeth are dripping

Red surrounds

I lay still

Afraid to move--

The pain extinguishes

Our eyes now lock

All time stops

 

His fingers draw symbols

Across my body

Spiral designs

A heart he draws now

He knew my true want

And now I am forced to haunt...

I am his, he is mine

My life is now reassigned...

Together we'll be

For eternity–

Reviews

[heich]

you really have a thing for vampire..i liked it..i wish all vampires are good looking..

[DeAn]

the final bloodrush.

it is the quickening on the vein to the lips of he who reins over you.

beware the bite that leaves you undead
doomed to walk the night instead
for no immortal can resist the evil of

the thriller.

:)

great write.

[Wolfwind Words]

Fear and lust swirl as one in this. Blood becomes life from on to the other and then in the end a perfect union of the dark trick.
Great Job.

[~ Tex]

Well done... well told... well written!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This is a fabulous poem. I love it, awesome write!!!

Heather

[Lcwrestler285]

really cool

[Sean M. Addams]

very nice imagery in this piece... i'm a big fan of vampires so i really enjoyed reading this... nice job:)

[Just call me Nini]

i really liked the imagery of this one. I could imagine being scared and excited at the same time. very good!

[Tania Leigh]

Ooooh, Kristy...this is good

Very creepy but also sensual

Great write!