Silent Stars

Silent is used so often. this doesn't rhyme. and not very good.

so many voices, so much noise
hard to explain the amount of irritation
too much nuisances
can't really see the beautiful stars
too many lights and helicopters in the sky
i envy those stars,
staring down at us in the sky
they wonder why we need so much luxuries
when they could be content
just by staring at natures events
i wish i could one day get a little closer to the stars
but remain silent and tell no one about their confusion

Reviews

[Rainbow Silhouette]

awww i like that story, i would love to be closer to the stars too

[Shadow in the Dark]

I love the poem. Some days i also wish i could be closer to the stars. Bt unlike you once i got back down i would tell people about the stars but i wouldn't talk about thier confusion. I would talk about thier beauty and thier silence and how all you can do somedays in just look up and stare at the stars for hours foever in a state of awe.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

love the poem...the last line "but remain silent and tell no one about their confusion" is amazing...!!!!

[paradise]

I love this poem its alot of creativity and I understand what you mean

[Tree Bark]

noo its good and i agree with what you're saying :)