Sunbeam freckles

Sunbeam freckles

A Poem by paperdaydreams

Dappled daylight drips onto my toes
A kaleidoscope of sunbeam freckles

White sales ponder the ocean above my head
A single glowing lighthouse calling them home

Mother, Humming hot-breathed lullabies
As we ink this beautiful summer tattoo.

© 2013 paperdaydreams


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Gorgeous imagery, and I love the alliteration in the first line! You've captured a simple yet impactful moment in time in a simple yet impactful format. A tiny grammatical note: you may want to consider using "hot-breathed" with a hyphen to clarify the adjective form. Such a beautiful piece, well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

paperdaydreams

11 Years Ago

Thankyou! and oops didn't realise I'd missed that out, gotta say, I'm not the best with grammar :')



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Gorgeous imagery, and I love the alliteration in the first line! You've captured a simple yet impactful moment in time in a simple yet impactful format. A tiny grammatical note: you may want to consider using "hot-breathed" with a hyphen to clarify the adjective form. Such a beautiful piece, well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

paperdaydreams

11 Years Ago

Thankyou! and oops didn't realise I'd missed that out, gotta say, I'm not the best with grammar :')

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paperdaydreams
paperdaydreams

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Hiya, my names immy ((short for imogen, but no one ever calls me that))... basically I'm a fifteen year old who daydreams too much; It's what I do best so I wondered if I could translate my imaginatio.. more..

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