A Secret's Decaying Case

A Secret's Decaying Case

A Poem by paperdaydreams
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Keeping a secret can sometimes make you feel like the burden is killing you slowly from the inside. As you try to cover up the pain from the outside you're only trapping the murderer in.

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As the trapped words clog his first lung
His throat fills with the thick smog 
No gas mask can save him now, only his tongue

A swirling tendril trembles on the trigger
Still he keeps his jaw clamped shut
Russian roulette with one shaking figure 

Long lived fear has rusted the hinge
And screws dig into gaping wounds
As tears clutching onto his eyelash singe

The padded cushion of his rosebud lip
May seem plush to any visitor
But the stitches, in reality, are loosing grip

A true artist can cover any faults
With a slathering of oil here and there
The footstep of a paintbrush following the waltz

The layers only build up as cracks re appear
Until Van Gogh's starry night sits before you
Choppy strokes merge together through a threatening tear

Little would you know if below a prepped canvas, formed of barbed wire mesh 
Sat constantly cutting deeper into the secret's scarred flesh

© 2013 paperdaydreams


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Another great use of words and imagery. Although, it should be "losing" and "reappear".

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

paperdaydreams

11 Years Ago

Thanks, oops didn't notice that, I'll have to change it later :)
Nirego

11 Years Ago

You're welcome; it's very easy to read what we think we have written! I'm just a bit of a stickler f.. read more
I liked your word usage. You created great imagery with them. Nice job on this one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

paperdaydreams

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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paperdaydreams
paperdaydreams

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Hiya, my names immy ((short for imogen, but no one ever calls me that))... basically I'm a fifteen year old who daydreams too much; It's what I do best so I wondered if I could translate my imaginatio.. more..

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