Whirring, click click, flash

A light hearted poem about falling in love

Whirring, click click, flash

Another memory that's saved in my mind forever

Along with the macro shot

Of your green eyes

The tie dye of your pupils

And the ink blot of your iris

Dotted in the center of material 

Whirring, click click, flash

Another portrait shot of your hair dancing

Playfully through the yellow brick road

Of the sunset sky

Because when we're together

Your eyes are my emerald city

And you give my tin man body a heart

Whirring, click click, flash

A blurred out background as all the focus is on you

I don't care for any exotic paradise

If i saw a pig flying past 

I'd only exclaim a damn

Because some winged pork chops

Ruined my image of you

Whirring, click click, flash

That picture of your smile as you fall back in my arms

Every pixel holding a tiny particle

Of your perfection

Your lips tainted rose with 

The sweet cherry juice 

Of your laughter on a summer's day

Whirring, click click, flash

Every second I spend with you, a pinned polaroid 

Kept in my rib cage chest

Beside that heart shaped sticker

You gave me on valentines 

Primary school 1982

I could never forget 

Your chubby cheeks splattered with freckles

Your map of my future kisses

Dimpled as you smiled shyly at me

And held out your precious offering

As I gave back my own love struck heart

Along with my navy blue jacket

I gave you that rainy Tuesday morning

And the pen I lent you

In Mr Jackson's biology class for the lesson

Those are the three things I never did get back...

Reviews

[River Page]

So I guess I'm the first to review this.I really like how you incorporated the whole Wizard of Oz thing in. It really went along well with the whole child-like imagery of the peice. And it kinda seems like this is about a girl and gay love makes me happy so thumbs up for that lol. Nice work, kiddo :)

[paperdaydreams]

yeep you sure are :) thankyou, i wanted to make sure it showed how long they'd been in love with the child like imagery and that anyone can love anyone no matter who they are :)

[River Page]

Right?! I'm gay or bi...(can't really decided if I like girls..) and my mom is an Evangelical Christian Youth Pastor. So its glad some people think so.