Sifting

when i realized my writing potential

I’ve had too many trials and tribulations to go through.

Changing my ways has been a little well, s****y.

My life’s been bitter for a while now.

I’m an angel that can’t soar, can’t fly.

Trouble follows me everywhere I go.

I’ve always been despised for what I do and who I am.

Everything I try to do, never works out.

I just want to be normal like everyone else.

I’m crying inside with so much grief.

I’m hurtin inside from so much pain.

Between life and death there’s absolution.

Reviews

[UponATyme]

Good at getting the feelings across. I like how the language wasn't contrived, like Holden Caughfield writing poetry.