Art

I could write about something dark
Because it reminds me of your eyes
Or perhaps a bird
To show how you never
Seem to be earth bound

Maybe a little flower
For you are ever changing
And still have much to grow
Until spring arrives in full bloom
And you drown me in your petals

How about a dagger?
Your wits are just as sharp
But your surface is cold
And stained with the blood
Of all the people you've touched

I could write about you
For as long as I please
Because you are a mystery
Shrouded in the art
That I paint you to be

Author's Note

This is a poem that I wrote a little while ago, so tell me what you think! I'm trying out these writing websites to expand my skills and gain more experience. Therefore, I will most likely be posting more of my writing very soon :).

Reviews

[Lero Ro]

I really like this, it's so detailed but not too much and it's really touching and it got me a excited. Keep it up :)