Bleed

A poem of my feelings and things I did....... I may feel ashamed, but I'm not afraid.

It's not easy

To cause the pain

Only if

You're not to blame

It's not hard

To feel the need

It's there in everyone

To just bleed

Just to feel it

It means you're alive

It's just the pain

And the blood will arrive

It's so simple

The way life goes

It's only us

That make the woes

Some think it best

To just run and hide

I don't think so

You should fight and ride

It's the bleeding

That calls to us all

But it's rough on me

When I hear that call

Maybe it's a sin

I don't really care

It never really mattered

My own bleeding is rare

Reviews

[r]

This is amazingly, simply beautiful and stunning. Love this poem, and the structure is freaking amazing. I really, really loved it.

[DamienHino]

wow your poem structure is beautiful!!!!!
"It's so simple
The way life goes
It's only us
That make the woes" kind of my favorite line...but the whole poem is my favorite so it's hard great job!