Stunned

Stunned

A Poem by Paradoxical

Stagger and fall
Down on the ground
Stunned

Can't get back up
I've fallen hard
Pained

Face down, bleeding
Aching body
Shunned

Raining ashes
Into my head
Feigned

Dark colored skies
Friction weakened
Faint

© 2010 Paradoxical


Author's Note

Paradoxical
the format is weird, I know, it's supposed to be 4, 4, 1... so that's why it's strange... what do you think of the word choice?

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Added on July 25, 2010
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Paradoxical
Paradoxical

Forever Land, Where Dreams Never End, AZ



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I write because it is my dream to be a writer and I enjoy it. I can pour my heart into a poem or a story and make it as artistic as I want. It's a beautiful thing to have the words to express myself w.. more..

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