Reflection

What do you see?

"I love you,
And I'm sorry it took me so long to realise it,"
I let out a sigh of relief,
And stepped away from the mirror.

Author's Note

How can I improve this?

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

I just think more mirrors.
But that could just be me.

[Adil]

Loved the way it was described...
For suggestion may be you can describe your surrounding in reflection to your inner state..just it will enhance the overall effect.

But still it is a commendable work..Thanks for sharing..:)

[jrc]

I don't know how to improve this, but I think this is okay - short but have different meanings.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha, this is very good. The message is concise and clear and speaks more than the few lines offered. I'm not sure I could suggest how to improve though. Izzy

[mattavelli]

Hello! :)
Your message is clear. What sort of improvement would you want to make?