Black Hole

You have the feeling of something eating at your chest,
the sudden feelings coursing through your soul
hate
depression
sadness
anger
grief
guilt
regret....
as the hole in your very soul widens,
you panic
'what do I do' you ask.....
You then see vibrant colors rise around your darkened atmosphere
Your mood brightens at the happiness that over flows
yes, your surronded by love
you escape your black hole and come to a new world
a new age of your life....

Author's Note

this is how i felt when i went through depression, may it help you out of your black hole and may your friends guide you always

Reviews

[Sahar moonlight]

I liked the idea expressed in your poem.
The feeling of hopelessness and loneliness, then with a ray of hope shines in our world take us to a new age of life.
Nice write :-)

[PokemonFan#1]

Great write. I love you Jazzy! Keep it up you great writer you!