Melting

Melting

A Story by Once upon a time
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A morbid dream I had last night.

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She's lying naked on the white linoleum floor; face distorted in pain.
He poisoned her.
She's dying.

She clutches at her stomach repeatedly as if trying to pull out the pain. Her pale skin begins to bubble. Her fists clenched tight, the skin starts to break open at the creases. The muscles show through as she moves her arms around in agony. Slimy, her face begins to sag around her bones. Her mouth falls back, revealing teeth and gums and her ears are laying on the floor. Her breasts slide off of her body and make a smacking sound as they hit the ground. Slowly her body becomes a bubbling pit of gore and she is dead. I can't hear her crying anymore.

An eye.
Two eyes.
A shape.
She is re-forming. Becoming something putrid and horrifying. Her bones grow back into a mutated human shape. The muscle crawls it's way back into place. Her mouth is gasping for air and he eyes are wide open in shock. Fingers begin to wiggle in place and her skin roughly takes hold. It sags loose against the new shape.

In the blink of an eye there is a man. A melted man, just like her. She was made for him. She is his now. He owns her. Their legs don't work. They lay on the floor, sliding around like zombies. He rapes her over and over as she just lays still, weeping.

Babies ooze out of her malformed body and slither around her. There are so many of them. So many melting children.
They cry.
She screams, but the sound of her pain is muffled by her melted lips.

She wonders how to stop this.
How it all ends.
No one answers.

© 2011 Once upon a time


Author's Note

Once upon a time
I had this dream last night. Hard to put into words how it actually looked and felt. In my dream I was looking though a glass window directly above the woman. She was Christina Ricci oddly enough.

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if i committed adultery and left tony, I would lose my giftings and my salvation, I would also lose them by endorsing sexual conduct other then in my HEAD..and I still have had prophecy like the horrible dream of you using your 14 year old daughter since I began to talk to him..I keep controlled for my salvation

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm confused?

Posted 13 Years Ago


but i also told her that i would never leave tony, nor send him dirty pictures, cam, phone sex or things like this, I told her the truth he is a fantasy..she knows the entire truth, earning her trust I am sure because of it

Posted 13 Years Ago


i did not lie to michelle..she knows how i feel about him..she knows..she knows the entire story..earning trust takes honesty...

Posted 13 Years Ago


you did not have that dream, you are using ploys as you always do to try to get sympathy and your own way..the man does not want you..do you not feel any pain for what you did to michelle or your nieces and nephews?

Posted 13 Years Ago


holy f**k susanne..you need to be in a hospital, this constant threat of that abortion and reminding him of it is just so horrible, your tactics..your comments on russian chess..your obsession is gross, all your poems basically reflect either your obsession with no fruit to come, pain, pot shots at others, or a love that will never be..I know the abortion was hard for you...you need to be seen by a doctor and proper therapy

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 27, 2011
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Tags: horror, melting, melted, woman, gore, blood, rape, pain