Untitled Poem About A Drug Addict Leaving For Rehab

The title says it all

In a couple of years I will be fine.

In a couple of months I will stop

blowing my mind.

In a couple of hours I leave to fulfill

my promises that I never kept. 

In a couple of minutes you will hug me and cry.

I will tell you I'll come back alive,

healthy,

and bright with a clear mind,

but it's hard to tell when your life has

been missing. 

Reviews

[Jbmuse]

Well done.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i liked it.. short yet so very powerful

[shardsofFrance]

I like it. Very well written.

[Roe]

very good

[trainwreck]

I love short poems! This was complete, which is pretty rare for a short poem. Great job, keep it up. I especially like the last two lines.

[ghjckukc offcuo]

I like this... I'm currently arguing with myself over the need for such

[comingbackforyou]

i love it a bit short but it really says a lot!!!!!!

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Yes, the title does say it all.
Short and deep with emotions!
Well done with the mood and flow.
Keep it up!

[coma black☯]

Lol nice title, Gus :) xoxo
This was a really good poem though. Short, but really good. I could picture the setting and mood perfectly. Keep writing :)
Mwah