A Million Miles Away

I'll put the noose around my neck,

let the fire burn my skin,

let the razor blade slide across my body,

but only because I need to feel something.

I'll take a couple of sips of whiskey, 

drown myself in the bath tub,

scream at my reflection,

but only because I'm a million miles away from

sanity. 

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I love this. It's dark but dead on..xx

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Wow such feeling and depth into this, so real.

[InkSlinger]

I hate to ask.. but can I have your Ipod when your gone??
I don't think you will need it anymore..

Good stuff!!

[SkinlessFrank]

Tempting isn't it?

[paradise]

F**k its the damn truth nice job

[Ed Hart]

it's a long way back

[HoodLife]

Very Nice! I like suicidal stories. they kill my heart though.

[emma]

sucked me in from line one. i liked the whole thing, and it easily painted a picture in my head. great work:)

[Death Girl]

This sound like me many times. I can totaly relate to this. Nice job

[Coyote Poetry]

You create many deadly images in this poem. Each line adding to the powerful ending. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote