An Unforgettable memory

An Unforgettable memory

A Poem by A little twist
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Something to let you think of what you want to think...anything

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It was another gathering of memory surrounded by branches of brilliant leaves, the center of a black hole that lays deep in the center of me

 i have experience it and i have not forgotten those small sentiments of detail flying away with my trapped locked eyes that where unaware of other

view the area for mistakes but a lost back round that never accord to me, the floor that was never their but i never fell, when it accord where was my words my voice?

 I wouldn't see through i wouldn't see a reflection I wouldn't see anything but everything on what I saw...you

an unforgettable memory...

© 2012 A little twist


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Wow, that's very deep. :D Kind of leaves a deep resonance after being read.
One thing: In the third stanza, I dunno if you meant "occurred" rather than "accord", so I thought I'd point that out. Other than that, great job! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


A little twist

11 Years Ago

ohh yes thank you, my spelling and grammar happens to be completely terrible :)
Admiral Kirk

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome. :)
this is amazing i love how u don't use little words. u describe things very beautifully.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A little twist

11 Years Ago

Thank you, i like your as well :)

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A little twist

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