Be Different

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

To be just one of the many seems to be an awful fate...a number in the line. But if one tries to make a difference...that one action makes that individual stand out above the rest. I like your vision you created within this piece. Screaming to be heard can seem fruitless...but can also be effective if another joins, then another... soon becomes a roar of discontent. (I heard that somewhere in the past) I feel such sorrow for the one that is lost among the rest. Loved the poem :)

[Mockingbird]

it is hard to express you individuality among so many that are the same that either won't notice you or are too oblivious to see you. i suppose you could display your individuality through art. great poem.

[Monica]

A beautiful and powerful write, creating great imagery. I really enjoyed your poem!!

[just is]

Beautifully written and said. I like the depth of this.

[AnnaMae]

Ahh~ I love this too!! Write more so i have something to look forward to! XD

[Sleeping Maiden]

Beautiful write. I love how you crafted it. It's short but a very strong piece.
Meaning is very clear. I enjoyed it.
Fantastic write!

[Cathy Wattam]

Nice job. Nature provides us with such poet fodder, the streams of brilliance are endless. I really enjoyed this. Thank you.

[PadfootBlack]

Perfect. Effective structure and use of fragmented phrases.